After Crits I decided to bring it back to grey scale so i can understand distance better, i agree with everything they said. I've changed the walls scale and added some distance in the mountains, though possibly they could use a bit more. I've darkened the airship to bring it forward. Unfortunately i'm stretched for time between this and uni, but if i get a chance ill work colour into it again(: I'm happy with the composition and I've got a lot of triangle points working their way around the image to keep the eye focused. I really enjoyed doing these paints so if i get the next book i'll probably do some work for that too, and hopefully more on this (:
